All Comments on 'Penny's Correction Ch. 01'

Fantastic start, as always, can't wait for part 2 to drop.

There's a level of excitement in your work that I never thought I'd be attracted to, but I am.

more please!

Oh god yes more please

Looks like a repeat story of Lisa and Mac. Why didn't finish that one first?

"Are you wanting another game of tennis".. slightly weird phrasing... Also PLEASE: it is "lose/losing" not "loose/loosing". Little things, but please proofread. It makes reading the story far more pleasant.

This was a great story, all the anticipation and buildup was extremely erotic. I have been corresponding with a friend about setting up a session some what like this. Although our encounter will be much longer and much more intense. It excites me greatly to be on the receiving end of this type of act. Very sexy and thrilling! Looking forward to chap 2. 🔥🔥🔥🔥

I am highly aroused. Five stars. I look forward to the next chapter.

well done indeed!! (and thank you)....on to the next chapter....

Great story, sexy and exitiing, I love it...