All Comments on 'Permission Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
More crap

Again only concerned about herself. Husband? What husband?

Yep at this point she would only be for Soylent Red.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Laughably Bad t This Point

This is a parody of itself. Is there a husband? Stilted writing and dialogue not to mention a plot that ranks up with the worst ever on this site.Lakesail you can stop now. Its over.Come out of the basement Your mom wants you to cut the grass

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Garbage and Milkman Next?

Maybe a kid riding his bike home from school ?1* For fairly obviuos reasons.

LibertinemanLibertinemanover 10 years ago
Well,

I found it very stimulating. I hope you will ignore the ignorant ones and keep going with this outstanding tale.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Of Course You Like This Libertine

Your wife does this to you. Semi autobiographical right? 1* for this entry It has ceased to be erotic and BTW Where is the husbnd? Still around?

DesireeFoxDesireeFoxover 10 years ago
If only they would

not laugh at me requesting service for my computers. Fun and sexy she is exploring what she has permission to do. Nymphs love the stability of a family, but there is the hunger that needs to be quenched, at leasst this nymph is not as inflicted as I

DAMSEL Approved

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
so much for being "safe"

from the first chapter: ** He sighed. "I've thought about this a long time, and I'm OK, as long as you follow my rules. You always come home to me and you are safe about it." **

she has let two men fuck her raw so far...... the first time her husband gets a burning sensation when he pisses, the marriage is over at the very least, and his wife could be dead at worst. 1* for stupidity and not sticking to your own parameters

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

SMDH at all the sick fucks like Libertineman around here now. This site has totally abandoned anything but cuckold stories. I didn't realize there were so many pathetic perverted men! Highly pathetic actually!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Cuckerotica

Literotica needs to change their name. Of course the likes of Libertineman who relish humiliation and cuckoldry will always defend this trash. Come on StangStar we need another one of your stories to take the stench out of loving wives. The scores for this tale doesn't even average three stars. That says volumes. 1* for this "dreck".

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
My 2 Cents

Stangstar06 posted a short story yesterday on sol. Apparently LIT could not be bothered to post it here as there were too many cuck stories to post. Again their bias is showing

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
I would love

to see if hubby gets his chance at his newly liberated wife. Will he get better loving because he allowed her to live out her fantasy? Does she show him the extra planning to spice up his loving as she shows a total stranger? Is she happier now that she gets something on the side? Does she treat him better during the day because she is less frustrated? Please give us details on hubby now that he has given her special "Permission".

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Is this supposed to be erotic?

If this "writer" had a wife and she acted like this he would divorce her, she is just a cheap slut so I guess this is supposed to be a jack off story. I don't like the cunt so I find this a turn off, her idiot husband is too stupid and wimpy to be a real person, this just is bad.

x_witless_xx_witless_xover 10 years ago
She shaves in the morning..

or am I missing something here?

littlecordeleralittlecordeleraover 10 years ago
Kristin is a busy woman!

Doing whoever shows up at the door is a bit much, but this woman is far more adventurous than I'd ever be! Nevertheless, the chapters are short and to the point. The fast pace fits naturally with Kristin's pace. I like that! I look forward to the next chapter.

You'll have to forgive the morons who don't know what "loving wife" means in the world of sex. They're morons whose greatest fear is that a woman might fantasize about sex with another man.

LickideesplitLickideesplitover 10 years ago
Hubby slipping away!

Well, we now have two 'chapters' in which Sweetie's antics have no impact on her sexual (or other) relationship with her Hubby. She is taking good (if highly reckless) care of HER business (wish I had been there...with stainless steel condoms) but LW should involve her as a 'wife' rather than just a 'cunt curator!'

4* (a bit generous, but WTF)

Prelifeic_GoatherdPrelifeic_Goatherdover 10 years ago
Oops. I changed my mind

and was pleasantly surprised! Yeah, it's another cuck story, but I like your quick punchy style, swift innuendoes and almost "classic porn" scenes (will it be the plumber next?!)

I wonder if there'd be as many complaints if it was Mark playing away and Kristen was the one who didn't mind the extra marital sex?

Just a thought.

26thNC26thNCover 2 years ago

Whore takes it to another level.

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