All Comments on 'Personal Assistant Ch. 01'

... and as long as it doesn't get too kinky, I'll continue reading.

Love this opening! Looking forward to more!

Very good start and looking forward next installment. Do consider letting Harrison finish with Amanda before he fixates on his next prey. After all, Chloe is obviously available whenever, however ... Thanks for the read.

I look forward to chapter 2 :-)

Hugs Nev

Eagerly awaiting Chapter 02. You are extremely well written. You pull the reader into the story, giving superb detail without repeating and filling space with empty words. Excellent

Great premise and a very encouraging start to this hopefully multi chapter drama.

This is going to be a good one!

Very good. I hope Chloe puts up more of a fight now that she's aware of his power - then gets entranced anyway.

Love the pacing, the topics, and the writing. More please!

Perhaps Chloe feigns her submissiveness and performs so well that she is able to turn the tables on her boss....

A very nice start with lots of directions to go; hoping to see a bit of independence left in her, and some more of her enjoyment in seeing his taking other girls. *****

Excellent - really loved his entrancement of them both - super hot!

Very VERY Hot ... very eagerly looking forward to Chapter two!

Bon début ...