All Comments on 'Pink Moscato Pt. 02'

I dont get why ppl are giving this a low score I love the story so far and hope you continue

I could do without the callous man handling.

I think people are giving low scores due to the fact that it is a rape story with no warning of it being one. I also think that it isn’t a well written story considering in one scene she is on top of him with her face on his face and then she pulls out and flips him over onto his back which is the position he was just in so either you made a serious error or she spun him in a 360 in midair before raping him more. The only thing worse than a rape story without warnings is a badly written rape story without warnings.

I enjoyed the callous manhandling, myself, but as was mentioned before, the positioning was slightly confusing for a moment.

I think it needed a little more sneeky enjoyment to take the edge ofd the brutality.