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Anonymous7 months agoFun little tale spoiled by being written in the present tense. There’s a good reason why no novels are written in the present - it’s stilted and doesn’t flow.
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JBradford@JBradfordA writer for pleasure for many years. I have decided to take the plunge and share some of my writing. Please be honest, but kind.
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