All Comments on 'Planted Ch. 03 - Epilogue'

5 Big Blazing Stars a great Fantasy, what a wonderful way to end things for an old guy. Thanks, Buster2U

Nicely imagined and presented

An incredibly unique and original story! Well done! A couple critiques, though. First, and foremost, grammar. And secondly, I feel like all three chapters were a bit rushed. I think you could have expounded more, build up your main character a little more, go through his emotional turmoil and curiosity over the whole event, etc. I understand this is a site for erotic literature, and keeping it sexy is a priority for most, but I also think avid readers on this site like to allow themselves to be absorbed into the stories, to create a vivid visual in their heads as they read. Keep it up! I greatly enjoyed the originality of this series!