by ShadowLuver
Great advancement of the story, and set up for so much hot action! Can’t wait for more here.
Nice character development; hot natural first time anal. Now Mac can freely fuck them all!
Great story, hot and well written. Had a GF once who loved anal, as much as or more than in her pussy; never needed extra lube either, she was always plenty wet! I hope the next chapter cums soon!
Excellent installment to a great series! Appreciate the intro note about the transitive aspect; for those of us who've been reading this, the motivations and perspectives of the characters adds depth and helps give context for the overall story arc. Well-written as always, you've set the stage for much more hot sexual exploration yet to come!
Amazing: perfectly paced build-up, vivid sexual descriptions, natural and erotic dialog and characters. A+ writing!