All Comments on 'Play it by Ear Ch. 05'

Great start; I really like the conversation with Mom. That was unexpected and I loved it.

Great writing! More lighthearted than most orgy scenes and that is a tremendous plus. The Swedish depression - "we must perfect the solemn process of sexual perfection" - is sluffed off at this orgy. It is best to have imperfect sexual fun - just silly Brits and locals doing their joyously haphazard thing.