All Comments on 'Play Time'

by Hiddensub20

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26thNC26thNCalmost 4 years ago
Not sure

Not sure what praise kink is, but I've read much worse tonight.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Good first entry

I don't usually enjoy first time writers especially in the LW category, they're so often sissy cuck stories that few if any enjoy reading. This was a pleasant surprise although I have no idea what praise sex is supposed to be, my wife and I have been like what you described for over 40 years and never thought of it as praise sex. We're simply happy we can still enjoy each other.

Decent effort, maybe take a bit more time on the next one to introduce the characters and build a story, not just a fifteen paragraph sex scene. I gave it a three, it could have been better but at least it wasn't the normal drivel generally found in LW.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Who ARE these people?

And why are they acting like horny teenagers?

iameaseliameaselalmost 4 years ago

What?? No unrealistic negative IQ'ed bimbo wife giving up her anal cherry to her lover, screaming it isn't what it looks like, while a line of 75 guys are lined up around the block waiting to bang her, and hubby is jerking off his tiny 4" pecker with steel wool, while shoving a vibrating cactus up his butt?

Pshaw, I say,pshaw!!!

Nah, actually a decent start.

robroy93robroy93almost 4 years ago
Beats

Beats a cuck story all to pieces.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
4 stars

4 stars for simple fact that it isn't a cuck story hiding in the loving wives category!

HighBrowHighBrowabout 1 year ago

I like that the story is sweet and healthy, like things are at their best, before they get all bent and twisted.

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I'm a sub who needs a place to work out fantasies so I'll be writing some works. I am not an author, just horny as all hell. Hope you enjoy it, I'm open to constructive criticism.