All Comments on 'Playtime in the Office'

Interesting premise.

Needed much more dialog between her guy and her.

She needed to be directed/forced to describe how she's feeling. How close she is to orgasming. What her breasts need. What she'd like to be doing to him.

Four stars.

Thank you for the feedback. I will keep that in mind as I continue to explore my writing!

Definitely an interesting story. Well written and a good first story. I'd like to see more of this relationship.

Hot story!

Thanks for the comments! I appreciate it :)

Great! Can only wish I were her!

Great work building a engrossing narrative. I liked hearing the brat perspective.