by buckshots6
I’m struggling to explain why this wasn’t the best read for me. It seems to have all the right elements, but it is all just a little too mechanical, rushed and lacking in emotion.
Five rating, but this story needs much more pussy hair in each of the ladies' genital description. A treasure trail on at least one lady would have also been nice. Preferably, at least one guy in this story should have been the brother of one of the ladies. You know, a brother-in-law vacation. His sister should have eaten all of his cum from the other lady, his wife, his sister's best friend as the other husband stood their rock hard and watched this while considering helping her eat it. Always next time!