by Farleven
The only thing I regret about this story is that is far quicker to read a good story than it is to write one. Great story and more about a girl discovering her sexuality than one of lust and sex for the sake of it.
Yes, you've done well in part 3 and of course, looking forward to part 4.
You write the nervousness and confusion of Allison along with her fighting with her male self while questioning almost everything so well but the frantic groping and trying to figure out sex from the other position is so perfectly done that I can picture it and while it is funny it is also very endearing when you think of many of the first times people have gone through. I thought the challenge seemed somewhat of a dud after the first two but you managed to make it just as nerve racking and fun as the other challenges. I don’t know what the next challenges are but I am sure you will make them interesting and a fun read. Thanks for your work on this story, it really comes across well.
J.D.
I'd didn't think it possible for you to up your game, but you did. waiting impatiently for part 4.