All Comments on 'Poke-Slut Ch. 02'

by HypnoMaster27

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ScarnathonScarnathonabout 2 years ago

Not really advice but this is a great story chain. Big fan and can’t wait for more

sensual_baconsensual_baconabout 2 years ago

very interesting premise but I think you could go darker with it! maybe a sex fight between elaine and pheobe the for hypno's amusement the way that pokemon are made to battle? or a day in the life of hypno the poke slut trainer being served by his sluts

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Great story so far, so the question is what’s the end game? Is Hypno building a harem for himself, or is he going to make his Poké-sluts available to other Pokémon? Does he want to make it public to the world that he has these Poké-sluts or keep them hidden, how will the world take or will the accept it? Like I mentioned from the start I really do like this story great premise and I would like to see it continued, and there is so many ways you can go with the story that I haven’t even mentioned. Either way just keep writing this great story. Also perhaps have Hypno get his sluts a collar with special tags that would let other Pokémon know that the girls are sluts or have a conversation piece to draw in other potential Poké-sluts, regardless keep up the amazing work just threw that out there to hopefully add fuel to the fire.

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