All Comments on 'Policewoman to Gangsters Moll Pt. 02'

by MaccaDougal

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Excellent. I hope there are more chapters or stories.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

More yet.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Lisa needs to be taken deeper.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This is good stuff. Lisa can go much further down into excitement and darkness.

Wendywants2BtakenWendywants2Btakenover 1 year ago

Hmm they wouldn’t need to inject me and program me! I would willingly become their personal fuckdoll❤️❤️

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Noticed one glaring error in this otherwise very enjoyable story, Lisa appears to be wearing Trousers and a skirt, as when she first meets Andy she unzips her trousers and then in the next scene unzips her skirt :)

MaccaDougalMaccaDougalover 1 year agoAuthor

Whoops! Thanks for letting me know!

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Hi all. I have finished another story, and I am waiting for an editor to have a look through it. Hopefully won't be too long.