All Comments on 'Poly at the Poly Pt. 02'

You’re a great writer Spec. Can’t wait for part 3

This is an exciting slow burn. 5 stars as always.

Orgy!!

I read on your Twitter that this will be a 7 part series - really looking forward to it. Most swinging/sharing stories on Literotica tend to be one-shots. Enjoying the slow burn, although I do hope it evolves into all out orgies and debauchery before the end!

Strip poker. It’s an over-used device, no doubt, but it builds the sexual tension in such a nicely structured way, and you’ve used it to good advantage here. I like your characters, and I’m already eager for the next installment. FYI, though: if a woman has a wet spot on her clothing, it will be on the back. Guys always get that wrong, for obvious reasons.

Enjoying the story so far. Thank you.

This is just great stuff. Incredible buildup of anticipation. Beautifully done!

If you are going to take this to 7 fantasy days with these couples, they are going to run out of patience with each other and the Disney park. They need to go to Universal and spend time in the 3 broomsticks and the Irish Pub and taste the fantastic ales brewed just for them, forget the kid rides and get with the full blown activities they admitted they agree to but are afraid to act on. The only one that is backing out is Emily, however, I believe she already has and is afraid to admit it, because she is the one apt to want something more then what she has

Great story.

Nice slow build up.

Cracking build-up, enjoyable characters and a great set-up.

Hopefully more different games will emerge, sex-jenga perhaps, or sex pictionary, maybe?

But loving this story so far.

Great story build, I am looking forward to Pt. 3 and future Chapters. I like how you develop your individual characters, which I am trying to polish in my own stories.

I would love to see the six main players have individual offshoot stories in their future.

The "slow burn" of "slow burns".. love it!

Doesn't seem realistic that Emily is his 'wife'. It's casual, like she's his college girlfriend, not wife. Not saying he has to be mad or something, but the suspension of belief didn't hold.

The fact that he doesn't talk much is basically a copout for not having to write the dialogue.

Quite an imagination you have ...

Where do we go from here?

Let's find out ...

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Gawd! Its a slow motion car crash! You build the tension well. The absence of proper discussion of limits / tolerances prior to being egged on by the swinging Cassie & Jack spell trouble ahead. Emotional heartache, turbulence, possibly marital doom? However, hints are there that maybe he’s the only one not in the know!