All Comments on 'Power and Corruption Ch. 03'

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Qwer12Qwer12almost 2 years ago
Keep It Going 5 Stars

Keep it running long. The characters are top shelf fun and well done. The plot is well developed and rocking alone. Time to go forward and turn up the heat. We need or hero to totally submit to her master the do as she is told. Lela needs to get in on the action and get her sweet holes licked by the submissive slut. Rock on. Cheers

BethanyBDSMBethanyBDSMalmost 2 years ago

Enjoying the story! Keep the chapters coming.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I agree with Qwer12 It is time to turn it up some more, not necessarily the stretching of holes but definitely using them showing them as well as her nips,. It is also time for Lela to be licked and licked and take some control of her best friend. Pappasleaze!

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I have quite a few stories that I never finished writing. A downside of an overactive imagination, I suppose. Maybe I will share some of them here and see if people like them. That might help me find the discipline to finish them. I'll post updates about the next chapters o...