All Comments on 'Predator and Prey Pt. 15'

As always I loved reading the latest chapter and my caged clitty was leaking before I got my wand or my dildo to help me get my yummy cummies out. I can't wait to read more, I admit to not liking the Carol-Ann parts as much but that's because I identify so much with Kitten. Impatient to read what goes on at the playpen.

On a side note Sissy's BBC submission is my favourite story on here and I read it over and over wishing it was me with Big Daddy at the end.

This is my first time commenting ....I am real as fuck...check me out on FETLIFE, Motherless. YouTube and Xhamster...I am Ms Felony Strutter, leather clad, Blondie bombshell ...old school metalhead rocker bitch ...outlaw biker momma Tgurl...I play guitar, chain my sexy long 120 cigs and live to stay high as fuck be it grass...crack, crystal reg coke and bit of China White. I love these stories ..my fave series ..others I like are The Descent, Lost Daughter. .and another forget title but about a fellow 120 Blondie tgurl snow queen called Shayna. ..I love Carol Ann....love love an older Mom in her 40's/50's that discovers the beauty of getting high as fuck ...I am hoping Carol and Kitten find common ground with make up .dressing slutty and begin to get high together. Love to see Carol intro Kitten to crack.. I hope Kitten get's what all Tgurls MUST have, at least one pair of thigh high boots. Also be so sexy if Kitty and Carol smoke grass n cigs together and be it 120's. It is sooo UN Femme to smoke any cig shorter than 120. Kitten must learn the beauty of strutting on high heeled boots with that glorious powder back drip dangling a 120 .....Loved the other stories. Love to see a biker gang come into the scene. After Luis is done. ...with Carol...sell her off to a biker gang and Carol become a leather clad ...crack...ice ..grass loving biker Momma. Love to see Melissa bring them together smoking the glass dick. Another story I love is the Porn Star tgurl Mommy ..so love to see her chopping lines on a mirror smoking and introducing her new tgurl son to partying ....again. Check me out on sites I mentioned ...I am the real deal portrayed sort of.....so love Carol on the glass dick. ....can't wait for her and Kitten to leave lipstick stains on it . Kitten deserves a party accepting Mom....side by side getting as fucked pasing a joint and glass dick back n forth ..more leather....excellent stories Tawney....if ever in Philadelphia PA....Shotguns...oh Kitten MUST teach Mom how to roll a joint

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Definitely have Luis corrupt Melissa. It shouldn't even be remotely hard, girl is clearly bi AF but is on some dumb, bratty I only do girls trip. She needs some hard MF like him to open her eyes to what she really is, an equal opportunity slut. And a huge slut once she gets going I bet ;)

Looking forward to that and ofc for Kitten to finally have her ass expanded, hopefully that's the big date with Luis on Saturday.

One minor thing I disliked was kitten's new haircut, I really don't like those buzzcut side cuts. I just don't find them feminine and cute. Obviously it's your call and if you like them then it's on me to deal, and tbh that's not too hard. However though I'd mention it in the case audience opinions sway you for the future.

Once again great work and keep it cumming.

It's kind of difficult to track when there's so much down time between chapters. I know we all have other priorities, but the author seems to know where things are headed in the story. The MC is ruthless, but it's a good story.

I must say that I REALLY love love love the ultra-feminine side buzz cut. I think this was a fantstic choice Tawny!

New buzz cut is awesome!

Hoping Melissa will be turned into a cock whore

One of the most exciting prospects IMHO is to transform Melissa into a cock whore. This can be done concurrent with the story's main attraction: Kitten. It would also be some measure of poetic justice I think.

Also, when the story's most sexually arousing part comes up - when Kitten starts to prostitute, there are so many possibilities. Many a police officer can order her to get into his car. Kitten starts crying, but the officer gently carresses her and tells her she is drop-dead gorgeous. Then he pulls down his pants and you know what is next. Fabulous BJ and swallow. When the act is done he tells her she is the best ever, and that she should always be proud of who she is, and never leave her profession. This would bolster Kitten's confidence and inspire her to many other conquests. The cop can even light her cigarette.

Good call on the haircut style! Please transform Melissa to become a cock slave. It would be such delicious irony, and it would help Kitten hone her own skills.

Great to see a chorus on the matter of Melissa. I too think she should be permanently converted to cock. So erotic!

Several have commented on Melissa. She should be made to worship cock.

I've re-read all the later chapters. I have to say that this one (Chapter 15) is really the very best one! The long section on the new haircut at the salon is so captivating and erotic.

A nice touch to add some humor when Carol pleads with Luis to spend more time with her son, so he (Luis) can make a man of him. Of course, Luis is doing just the opposite, as he is working hard to make a woman out of Taylor.

And then Melissa playing with her clitty as she watches Taylor suck of Luis, marveling that young man is doing it on his own volition. I've been urging others to head over here to Literotica. I love the way everything is set up. A class act in every way.....................Jillian

These two paragraphs really had me going:

---When he looked in the mirror he saw he had chosen well. The clothes were almost gender neutral. His face though was very feminine and the entire image was of a very pretty young man who knew he was pretty and wanted men to know it. After posing a couple different ways in front of the mirror, he undid two more buttons on this top and THAT made the look! Now anyone looking got the hint of bulges on his chest. Was it really a boy they were seeing or was that maybe a... a girl?

He smoked while waiting for the bus. He had accepted that he was pretty... no, very pretty. He stood with one hip raised, then the other. He blew smoke from his lips provocatively. Several cars slowed down as they passed, the male drivers gawking at him, trying to figure just who, or what, they were seeing.----

Stupendous chapter!

Amazing how you subtly projected Kitten as a fatally flawed character. Shy and mostly introverted, he craved attention and appeals to his vanity. This allowed Luis to bring about a total character reinvention. Kitten now revels in her sexy, feminine appearance. I do hope she gets sluttier and sluttier, both psychologically and in physical appearance. I am sure Luis will make this happen!

I also hope you will continue the sensational descriptive writing of the salon makeovers. You appear to peerless in this regard!

Please don't leave the building for too long Mistress Tawny. But enjoy the break.

Thinking about these characters every day now. Unreal. Your sense of realism is astounding!

Terrific part. Loved when salon attendant told Kitten that his new buzz-cut would feel nice in man's hand.......the erotic allure of the smoking remains one of the story's most irresistible ingredients.

I think I speak for most when I say that the parts of every chapter that involve Kitten, Luis and their subordinates are the ones that bring on all the cummies. Still, I understand you need to swing back and forth, as Carol's degradation is a prime element in the plot.

At the birthday party, I though another possibility could be Kitten telling Carol, that he made a pass at Luis a long time ago, and told Luis he wanted to be his femme boi. Or something like that. Most readers I'm sure feel Luis will win him at the expense of Carol's ferocious anger, which leads to her throwing Kitten out for good.

At some point, Kitten might be entrusted to inject herself, which she would do gladly.

Please keep the postings coming, your own life's obligations notwithstanding. Thank you!

Wow! Chapter 17 is up at another site! Hoping it arrives on these shores soon! Love 16!

A favorite chapter of one of my favorite series ever!

This chapter and the two that follow it are really erotic. I am trying to keep my hands grounded on the computer desk! I hope this series never ends!

The new hair style is really fabulous! Loving this chapter!

Luis' evil influence, though for the purpose of this story, sexually arousing to the extreme, is a mind-molder in its own right, nearly as potent as the hormones.

Thank you! Great addition! Please add more salon activates in the future chapters. You really have that scene down to perfection!

Please stick with buzz-cut hairstyle! It is hot and so femme!

I hope the man on the bus and Kitten will get it on in an upcoming chapter.

-Jupiter

My own choice for the VERY VERY best chapter of all, though I love plenty more in this fantastic story! Luis says "many many many many" more men will be happy. I can't wait to soon read about these conquests!

Love the cosmetic feminization in this part! Highly erotic!

Totally loving it!!!!