All Comments on 'Presence'

Garbage, pure and simple. Why you thought this would be a good first story is entirely beyond me. Not only was the content disgusting and completely unbelievable, the writing and grammar, were atrocious. You need more than an editor you need help mentally. One more crummy writer to throw on the heaping pile of those to ignore. Unfortunately, I couldn't score it lower than a one.

Are you Ben's brother?

@Anonymous garbage man: Try writing a real review instead of wanking your frustrations out on what is a pretty much run-of-the-mill story. Unfortunately, you probably can't score at all...