All Comments on 'Presentations Ch. 01'

Good story with lots of potential. Keep 'em cumming.

I love male reluctant stories. They're just too few and far between.(Paragraph)...........

You obviously felt it was important to get to the sex as fast as possible, which is understandable. I prefer a bit more set up. en_extase is about the best at that, although he's extremely parsiminous in his submissions.(Paragraph)............

More reluctance. More sexual tension for a longer period of time. Still, I love your theme, and I appreciate you taking the time to write and submit your story.(Paragraph).........

I look forward to future submissions.