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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

More please.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Very sexy! I love the dynamic between these two and would like to see the story continue.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

It could use some major editing, there are editors available to help you. It’s incredible how much it helps having a second pair of eyes read your work. Good story otherwise.

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I like to write kinky smut. I enjoy setting the scene and I love sensory masochism. Microfiction and randomness can be found at @asensualsiren1 on Twitter.