by Girl Friend
Crap. Absolute crap. Sorry but the author should pull this and rewrite it and this time answer the question how does the main character feel and why does she do what she does.
Girl Friend,
Next time, if your heels need cleaning, make him lick them clean.
Great idea for a fetish story, but no substance to it.
It felt like cardboard characters with no descriptions of the action ...
Woman bought shoes
Man asked her out
They had dinner
He fucked her
Sorry, but that is boring in my opinion