All Comments on 'Primal Prey'

I need my daddy dom to do this to me! This is so hot. Glad I found this!

Nicely done, Ginny!

I truly felt the passion and emotions in that scene from the sub perspective. Looking forward to reading the companion piece, told from the dom perspective. :)

Very erotic.

Damn sexy! Great job.

And so very well written.

So hot for 750 words

Would it be hotter with 1500 words? 3000 might cause my monitor to melt.

Thanks.

Can’t wait for the next one. Keep it up

Abidos

You do so much in 750 words. Amazing story!

So well written !!! Love it

A short punch story with plent to think about. Would have liked it longer but still loved it.

5 from me.

The utterly erotic sense of witheld animalistic aggression within both of them is shiveringly enjoyable, and makes the story incredibly romantic at the same time.

Thank you. 5*

Awesome! Loved it!

Very well written. He went in dry, that's cold as ice, but I realize that everyone has their kinks. It was quite enjoyable and well crafted. You did an excellent job of painting a vivid picture. Can't wait to see what you post next.

-Matt

Absolutely amazing and delicious. Your stories are always spectacular.

If a picture is worth a thousand words, you packed several pictures worth into 750. Excellent job.

Hope that wasn't the whole story. It felt like a snippet torn from a larger story. But was good.

sheer poetry