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All Comments on 'Private Scene'

by Kaishaku

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

There was a "gap" in the story; what happened?

Otherwise, well written and just the right length for a coffee break

TXanyTXanyover 12 years ago
Whew...took my breath away!

Yeah, there was a gap in the story, all right. Nice job.

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