All Comments on 'Queendom 01: Dilemma'

Hi.! If you enjoyed the story so far, please leave a comment. I'd appreciate if you could mention what you liked about it and what you skipped over. Thank you!

It is so strange to read a story that begins by mentioning me as an inspiration, and then goes on to have a far better writing style than I am capable of. If I had to nail it down I would say you have far more patience with your prose. Characters aren't just haphazardly chucked into a series of situations, everyone is given a richness of character which I have always told aspiring writers is the key to ensuring the humiliation has an emotional impact.

I always struggle to find a good inciting motivation beyond just "she was into that". Having the idea of unique sexual adventures as a surrogate for sex in a couple that can then be replicated while apart is inspired.

There are many more parts now things have been established that I look forward to reading through them in the coming days (I'm not going to rush this).

i really like this story

thanks for making myday