All Comments on 'Real Estate Convention'

Caught no… silly yes.

1/5

Decent story until you revealed your fascination for black dick the bigger the better

You haven't written in a long time. I don't understand why you needed to continue writing?

Predators belong in the rape/non-consent category, it couldhavebeenput in interracial love as well. Nick the prick used drugs and grooming to manipulate desire in Sarah. It wasn't like she didn't go to the convention with something in mind, but... What Nick did reminds me of what Cosby was accused of doing to women. Sarah had shown she wasn't in a mental agreement for physical interaction. She was having a physiological response fueled by alcohol, drugs, and normal hormonal responses. But she was still mentally defending herself until Nick's effort of coercion won the day.

A vomit!

Just another boring cuck and skank whore wife story.

The description of a silent fart in a barrel would gain more interest than this talent free low performance attempt.

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You can't end a story like that

Nothing but fucking waste of time reading that sorry crap !!!!!

Very poor writing, couldn’t finish the story.

sorry i read the whole story

Cheating cunt sleeping in the wet spot.

Okay!

3

This story, loaded with sexual descriptions. fails in what is most required in LW: conflict between husband and wife.

As I see it, Nick is a cheating piece of shit, bordering on a rapist, And Sarah is a fucking slut, who deserves to come out of her divorce with nothing.

I wonder about the anonymous and not so anonymous people who come on here to launch attacks on the characters and authors of the loving wives category. What do you expect here. This is a site that deals in erotica and this category is about infidelity. If it upsets you , try another site or category. Stop being childish and grow up

Kiwi,I would assume that everyone knows what kind of site this is, and what the stories are about. Some of us what the cheaters to burn for their infidelity. Why do our opinions on the story matter any less than yours? It’s childish for you to think these stories only belong to you degenerates.

@Kiwihunter, of course the category is about infidelity, the key is what happens AFTER the infidelity.

Lacking a plot and an ending.