All Comments on 'Recaptured'

A good first story. Open to possibilities. Would have liked to know their ages, how, when or where they had previously met. You made a rookie no-no mistake of having two characters with basically the same name - very confusing for the reader. It kept distracting me as I read. If I was subbing the story I would have told you to change one of the names to something completely different. Well done otherwise. Keep writing.

@RoissyAngel - Many thanks for your feedback, I am glad you liked my first attempt. You are completely correct about the character names, I hadn't given that any thought but I will keep that in mind for the future...Thanks again for reading :-)

keep going, well written only as mentioned name problem. We need to know the size of his peepee and if he would be forced to shave.

@anonymous - many thanks for the feedback, I will try and remember to include info like that when I expand on this story

Once you serve you never really escape ! Those of us lucky enough find our way back. Please continue the story.

I love this so much. I really hope there will be more