All Comments on 'Recolonization Ch. 04'

Wow, Celina is getting pretty big really fast. Love the story btw. Interested to see the characters get along and see the interactions as they get bigger.

You have probably planned out the story already, but I can share one thing I noticed with a lot of BE stories, and that is they quickly become less interesting as the reader realizes the growth is consistent. When each week is the same before it, but with slightly bigger sweater puppies. The best stories I've read avoid this by making the growth in fits and starts, or tying it with some plot and story to keep the reader hooked.

Do with this as you will. I can't wait to see the next chapters