All Comments on 'Reunited'

Good story. It could use more development to support some of the more challenging aspects such as her father being ambisexual. It’s plausible, but the reader wants more story to explain his having fucked many different men and women, but [she] was the best. I liked this work very much. I hope others give you support for it.

Thank you for the feedback. The father is a self insert character, and being bisexual myself, I didn’t think I needed to justify it. But I understand where you’re coming from, and will look to add more depth in my future work.