All Comments on 'Revenge and Recapture Pt. 01'

Looking forward to more

Not a bad start, but. . . . the story goes: she put a ball gag in his mouth at the house, and next moment he is openly speaking to her, where did the gag go ? . . . . . . also, a quick proof read, "torso body " , apart from these a good situation that shows a lot of promise, i look forward to chapter 2 , keep up. the good WORK !