All Comments on 'Revenge on My Ex Ch. 02'

I can already imagine some of the comments, but I enjoyed it. You warned us, it is clearly NC, but the writing is well done, and a little intensity never hurt anyone...with an exception or two.

Thank you for your comment aznlookingguy. I have gotten some negative feedback. No matter how many warnings I attach, I always get a lot of people who are offended by rape fantasy. I write stories that I would want to read myself. I've found it is a lot harder than I thought to find NC stories. They usually end up being some kind of CNC or milder BDSM. I do welcome constructive criticism and one comment mentioned a lack of storyline. Some of the future chapters do go into an overarching plot, but it takes a while. Glad you enjoyed!

I absolutely love this story. I would like to see one more chapter with them alone together but you are such a great writer I can’t wait.

and with him inviting witnesses leaves an opening for arrest and prison. TK U MLJ LV NV

I love it! I search for these for a reason. Everyone has there fantasies.

I can't wait to read more!

This guys sucks

are you really a female or a man posing as a fake female?

see i have nothing against

non con and bdsm and self hatred

but the large dildo anal really disgusted me it is inhumane

wasnt she bleeding from her rectum how is it even possible to take something so big with such a fast that too in her ass

atleast be a little realistic

it seems too painful and bloody even in fantasy

Well, at the end of the story, I do hope that she exacts a long and painful revengeful punishment on him.