All Comments on 'Revenge on My Ex Ch. 05'

As others have commented this goes beyond non-consent, but that’s a matter of degree. My issue is it defies believability - you kept her locked up for days and nobody wondered why she missed work, none of her friends called or dropped by?

I read a lot of these and it’s good for a wank but if anybody thinks the first time she got to a phone she didn’t call the cops, they’re oblivious.

Anon, I appreciate your honesty feedback. I wrote the first few chapters with no intention of ever sharing them. Later I shared the first two chapters on Reddit and got some good feedback so decided to publish here. I agree there are some definite plot holes so that is something I can work on in the future. Glad you got a good wank out of them. Regards, Red Phoenix

plsss next part asap

Much of it was good and entertaining. Interested in some constructive feedback?

Anon, I'd love some constructive feedback. Feel free to comment here or private message me. Glad you were entertained!

and now i hate this story more than ever

highly unbalanced forced love

yukkk

in all the previous story you were just plain super painfully abusive for almost no reason

the 4 chapters were constant pain to read to find abuse after abuse

and now that you are getting negative comments and feedback

u suddenly decided to paint him a gud person taking mercy on her

and her as the only bad person in the story

and the worst was the lovemaking which made me puke

he claims to love her ? love her

which lover in this whole world lets his friends rape,beat,humiliate and abuse their lovers?

"Over the next few days, I allowed my bitch to heal physically from the abuse she endured over the weekend. At times I felt a little guilty when I realized the brutality she had endured at the hands of me and my friends."

i swear when i read it felt like a pedo feeling bad for his sa child victims and trying to make them sandwich as a compensation

I loved it! I am breathlessly awaiting your next chapter.

Well, what a big difference this story has from others is the shear brutality he does to her and then gives her no aftercare at all. He beats her with his belt 50 times, then rapes her, then beats her again for more than a half an hour. That she was even alive after that beating is only in a story. She should have been in some deep shock that she should have passed out. In a few other stories, after a beating like she gets, the aftercare is given so that the slave knows that the master cares. At least he lets her clean up a bit before he rapes her again in bed without so much as a thought to how badly he beat her in the shed. Can anyone say "Stockholm Syndrome"?