by jamax
Erotic and emotional both at same time. Waiting for the next part eagerly. Please post it quickly.
A long, long time ago Archie, Bettie, Veronica, Jughead and their friends became a secret guilty pleasure. As I read each issue of the comic I enjoyed the story lines, but I dreamed of Betty and Veronica naked, their magnificent bodies revealed in all their splendor. It was me next to them, not Archie.
Even today when I see an Archie comic book in the rack at the grocery checkout counter those naughty imaginary images are the first thought that pops up.
Thanks for bringing that youthful fantasy to life.You captured the personalities of Archie and his friends beautifully. I only wish that your descriptions of the events were more detailed and slower paced, perhaps over multiple chapters, not just one. It just seemed to this reader that I was being rushed through the story rather than permitted to savor it.
I will be looking forward to seeing where you take the gang from Riverdale.