All Comments on 'Road Tripping Pt. 09'

I cannot believe that this was published here, before I had reached half way on the first page, I gave up trying to read this, an English teacher would have put a red line across the whole page, the spelling is atrocious and the number of grammatical errors make this unreadable.

This work needs to be proofread and some serious editing taken place before it should be considered for for publishing and reading.

If I had purchased this story then I would have been demanding a total refund.