All Comments on 'Role Playing Ch. 21: Stripper'

Great Writing, Great Story, Great Fantasy! 5 big blazing stars to the writer, This gave me Wood! LOL Reminds me of when my wife used to work at the Brass Rail in Sunnyvale. Ahhh Good Times, I don't remember her fucking any customers like this, but I know she fucked some the men employees. I think they were cooks and she fucked them in some back room. LOL I found out this happening when I just stopped by and the place was almost empty. When another waitress came by for my order and I asked for Karen, she Completely Freaked out! Panicking, That kind of told me she knew Karen was fucking someone! LOL Good Times. I was so proud of my wife Karen.

How is that fun for him? A balding fat dork boss of his wife getting a cheap screw and no protection?

So, just another weak and pathetic man letting his slut wife, who is now a paid whore, suck and fuck and get fingered by absolutely anyone else. But the husband gets NOTHING physical of course. Just his slut wife.

Now it's even more ridiculous that she is now fucking the husband of a "friend", the bar tender and now her Boss. More and more ridiculous.

I really liked the way you built up to this last chapter, dialing up the sexual tension and keeping the reader wondering how far the wife would go. My only criticism, and it's a small one, is that you could have progressed the arc a little bit faster by skipping a few of the stories in the middle. But that's just me; others undoubtedly have different opinions. Don't worry about commenters like "Lenard Spencer" - if he is reading the 21st chapter it stands to reason that he enjoyed it or else he would have stopped wasting his time a long time ago. He just feels guilty that he enjoyed it so much, so he has to leave a negative comment to assuage his guilt. I find people like him pathetic.

As swingers we went to a strip club with friends, Jenny was dared to strip? Enjoyed it so much she became a stripper for a while!