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Mmmmm. I don't think so. Nice try, no cigar.

Happy to See You with Another story³

Some people will like what I write, some people won't. That's fine. Readers come here, I imagine, to have their own fantasies fulfilled. I write to set down what has happened in my life. Not word for word, of course, but what happened nonetheless. Life is much more improbable than fiction, too.

There is promise in your writing, and a clarity that I believe would improve over time if you keep at it. I hope you will write more.