All Comments on 'Rose's First Experience'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

HymEn

Popper_PapaPopper_Papaabout 3 years ago

Yeah!!!! Quick and to the point!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Read some other stories and learn how to write in English! The idea and storyline work, but get someone to help with grammar and editing.

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