by LiMelleaux
nice keep up the good work. The growth is going on stedily, not too fast not too slow.
Also love that you keep using the accurate messurments.
Loving the concept of the series, can’t wait for more. I think you could stand to take more time in the sex scenes for sure, it felt like that was a little rushed, with only 2 paragraphs from insertion to cumflation, and not a whole lot of time given to the cumflation before the expansion began. This could be made better if each section was given time to enjoy each action, rather than just rushing through each one.
Very strong premise though, can’t wait to see where you go from here