All Comments on 'Sadie the Witch Ch. 02'

everything you wrote here is great. but your build up is to slow if your only gonna do a page. as a reader kinda feels like a serial show that runs for 15 minutes then stops mid sentence and you gotta wait a week to pick up in the middle of the conversation. next time (presuming you want to write more) take your time and put a little meat on these bare bone you got. good bones though....so far.