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by jake1969

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doodlesdaddoodlesdadalmost 11 years ago
Tenses, tenses, teneses

Watch your tenses. You're jumping betwwen present tense (passes) and past tense (passed).

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
More tenses.

I got to the fourth para and the tense change beat me.

Could you please edit the tale to all past tense and repost it. The result will be worth it.

Thanks.

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