All Comments on 'Sarah vs. the Third'

I was so glad you posted a new chapter. I had worried this series was over. Loved this latest entry. A little more story than usual and I appreciated that. Got more into Sarah's thought process, which was great. Loved the little Sarah/Carina touches you sprinkle in, but of course the stuff with Hannah was the main attraction and you delivered. That was hot! This was probably the most "justified" pairing you've done so far, and oh boy, really great stuff.

It's hilarious that Sarah has now slept with all of Chuck's girlfriends. Too bad he doesn't have anymore for her to seduce. I'm definitely curious about what's next. Perhaps Sarah has to seduce a female mark with Chuck listening in? That could be hot. Whatever you come up with, I am definitely eagerly anticipating it. Thanks for sharing!

So thats Lou, Hannah, Forrest and Jill... any chance of having Ellie next?

I love lesbian celebrity fiction and yours is the best. So much detail and the vulnerability of Sarah makes each story so much more relatable. Keep up the good work!

P.S. Ellie is the next hottest girl in Chuck and it would be amazing to see that pairing!

Awesome stuff! These are all very hot and cool stories. Hope to see maybe a group thing with the CAT Squad or at least a full story with Carina. Keep up the great work.

Morgan's girlfriend Alex on the menu?

I just ended to read your stories, and the first thing I must say is: Thank You.

Not only by making the last hours of mine very "fun", but, over all, letting me learn how to pleasure a woman.

Your way of writing (both descriptve and introspective, the way the stories are fitted in the show, the fact they are not focused on a scene in particular [it makes the story more realistic] and the psicologycal way-of-doing of Sarah and Co.) is simply perfect, but expecially the way you described the sexual acts interested me.

I thing the informations aquired by reading those stories will be important (I hope -_-) when those situations will appear in my life (in a etero way ^_^'), and so I want to give to you my thanks in advice. ^_^

The idea of a bisexual Sarah is good (and I think you are not the only who imagined it) but making her something between a girl fallen in love of a guy, a human being with fears and shame, and a nimphomanyac lesbian made the right mix: the character who come out of it is neither of them but both of them, in a way that can be (almost) understood by common sense, and the situation in which Sarah make out his hidden nature have an interesting variety.

The idea of making her mate with girls not-initially-bisexual (in the first, fourth and, maybe, second story) is even more exiting, but it seems to say that all the girl are secretly bisexual (even if the story need for that). More, I don't like filthy language or violence in sex (S&M incluided) but I know that insert in a ero-fic different ways of acting just uprise the audience so... I understand it.

Is interensting the fact that, even if Sarah call herself bisexual, nor in the stories nor in her memories (always in the story) she talk about experiences with men. I, as hetero, like stories with a male in them (even the strap-on dildos compense well this lack) but, in this case, I don't know if it would be the better idea: in your creations I can see the "yuri" idea well rapresented ("yuri" means "lily" in japanese, and also mean the idea of "pure", intended as lesbian love and/or sex) and I think this way of writing is good for itself.

I know a lot of time has passed since you posted your last story, and that means there is a little possibility that I could see more of them, but I hope to see another of them, because you do not only write a erotic fanfictions, but you put in them some kind of "humanity" that I rarely seen in other stories too.

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