All Comments on 'Sarah's Mistake Ch. 02'

Not perfect but better than the first chapter. I hope more is coming and we continue to see improvements.

It's getting very complicated but fun

You refer to him in part 1 the entire time as David, asserting his dominance. The minute he tucks her, he's 'Dave' and texting like a teenager. That's a little offputting. You have it being 2:30 - 3:30 in the morning, then hubby being home in an hour, him being home and making breakfast. In 1 paragraph you jumped hours which is normally fine, but your timeline falls apart.