by Tawjg423319
Lovely. I confess I don’t really understand the obsession with facials in modern porn. I’m more like how you’ve written Justina, I like to swallow or snowball. Regardless, another 5 star outing and again thank you for your time and effort.
Great job!
5 Stars.
As mentioned before, proof reading would be a good idea..
Kisses, Stef
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I loved the waking up scene! And I love that you add some little details from their everyday life, that makes their relationship more rich and real! Great part! Waiting for more and 5*!
Enjoying your characters immensely. It's gonna be a rough month for the protagonists workflow. Sexy trans girl is a big distraction. You have a few editing errors that take me out of the story occasionally. I'm guessing you struggle with the same thing I do, I'm horrible at proofreading my own work. I'd suggest finding an editor. I know I need to do the same. Excited to see where you go from here. Keep up the good work!
Thank you for writing three installments of this lovely, sexy, sensual, and oh so very sweet story. I loved the characters and their backgrounds and how their relationship bloomed. Well done, you.
Love the continual saga of our two star crossed lovers. It gives me hope for a brighter future in my own life that continues to unfold. Hope it turns out as great as this. Just have to 1st have that all to awkward coming out with the family. Then, no matter accepting or not, it is all up hill from there on. Wish me luck....