All Comments on 'Savour Me Pt. 01'

Just finished Savor Me/Orla, the first of your series I’ve read and loved it (I know, I should start at the beginning). So, here I am and really enjoyed this introductory piece - provided context with wit, bit of sass and perspective. And the closing creation of the solo video wonderfully erotic — grabs and holds attention. Curious aside: some writers of erotic fiction on this site, yourself included, add bra size (e.g., 44FF) when describing breasts, which for me is not erotic/detracts (to each his/her own). In your case, “busty” creates perfect image when combined with curvy and sexy not to mention orgasm addict. I suppose 44FF works if wanting to create a caricature. Pardon digression. I intend to fill in between this opening and Orla, then look for more. You write well, have a witty sense of humor and obviously enjoy painting easily visualized erotic pictures.

Migbird, thanks. Interesting point about breast size. My reasoning is the narrator will know what size she is, as I do, because she has to buy bras! So it's a 'thing'. She will not know the bra sizes of the other characters unless specifically told. I think I have stuck to this logic with my characters. Until now, I had never had anyone tell me that the term "40FF" is a turn off...😉

So erotic. I want the video now. 🥰

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Gracious I am so thrilled, and moist 😉, finding this series.

Bravo 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Aoife: Thank you. I'm glad you are finding it stimulating. 🙂

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Excellent. Got me going.

Amy xxx

Better than folgers .... just woke up