by coldprinter
I am really liking this story. But the switch from Emma to Zoey is jarring. You have created such a delicious character in Emma, able to hold her own with Mr. Harlow. The introduction of Zoey was a nice twist. But that twist has gone on now for three chapters without much mention of Emma. Please return to Emma 1-on-1, perhaps before staging to a threesome.
I binged this series all in one sitting, and it's so good! Are you planning to make a continuation of this series, or is this the last of it? I would love to see Mr. Harlow and Zoey actually starting to fall in love and somehow making it work (I'm a sucker for romance stories).