by targetman
By definition, this certainly belongs in Loving Wives. I suspect many will disagree, since this category has gone almost entirely to the dark side in recent years.
It becomes a real mess when confusion reigns about which Karen you are talking about. Perhaps a few more "My Karen" might have helped because often the reader doesn't know who the hell you are talking about. Cheers.
Cheating skank slut and idiotic brain dead husband won't make it much longer. No marriage here, what a joke. Antonio and Karen? Really? And hotel rooms aren't locked? People just walk in and start fucking?
at. least he was the "same size" and there was no humiliating the husband.
Congrats on your first story. It was too rushed but if you want a stroke story I guess it works. Being a woman, not for me. Good luck with your writing.
Sorry, but it's a serious mistake to have two women with the same name. It becomes too easy to lose track of which Karen is which and doing what. It's your first story, but I wouldn't do it again.
This is how a marriage starts to unravel. Get your retainer money out for a good lawyer, gonna be needed in the not too distant future.
No69hubris
definitely a cheating wives tale, done with lust by all parties
What on earth made you write a story with the two main women having the same name? It might have been a good story if i DIDN'T HAVE TO KEEP READING TO KNOW WHO WAS DOING WHAT. THE, OF COURSE, YOU JUST HAD TO GET A LITTLE QUEER ACTION . # STARS WAS STRETCHING IT.
"My name is John, my wife Karen and I have been married for 10 years now. "
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"They introduce themselves as Antonio and Karen. "
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Why name both women Karen? Even using Karen-1 and Karen-2 would have been an improvement. It's needlessly confusing, and and easy rating of 1.
Bitch told him he was going to be a cuck, and the made it happen. How is this a loving wife Ic69cunter? You obviously have never met a LW.
Hi everyone, thanks for all the comments. This is my first story, and that's how I will learn. I knew the 2 Karens was a bit gimmicky, but I didn't expect such strong pushback. Live and learn.
Anyway I love you guys that are my new followers and everyone that favorited 2nd Honeymoon.