All Comments on 'Second Honeymoon'

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jazzharpjazzharpabout 2 months ago

By definition, this certainly belongs in Loving Wives. I suspect many will disagree, since this category has gone almost entirely to the dark side in recent years.

lc69hunterlc69hunterabout 2 months ago

definitely a loving wives tale, done with love by all parties

TwentysevenTwentysevenabout 2 months ago

Is this a test to see if we can identify which Karen is which?

LenardSpencerLenardSpencerabout 2 months ago

It becomes a real mess when confusion reigns about which Karen you are talking about. Perhaps a few more "My Karen" might have helped because often the reader doesn't know who the hell you are talking about. Cheers.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Cheating skank slut and idiotic brain dead husband won't make it much longer. No marriage here, what a joke. Antonio and Karen? Really? And hotel rooms aren't locked? People just walk in and start fucking?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

at. least he was the "same size" and there was no humiliating the husband.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Congrats on your first story. It was too rushed but if you want a stroke story I guess it works. Being a woman, not for me. Good luck with your writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Sorry, but it's a serious mistake to have two women with the same name. It becomes too easy to lose track of which Karen is which and doing what. It's your first story, but I wouldn't do it again.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

This is how a marriage starts to unravel. Get your retainer money out for a good lawyer, gonna be needed in the not too distant future.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

No69hubris

definitely a cheating wives tale, done with lust by all parties

thecarolinadreamerthecarolinadreamerabout 2 months ago

What on earth made you write a story with the two main women having the same name? It might have been a good story if i DIDN'T HAVE TO KEEP READING TO KNOW WHO WAS DOING WHAT. THE, OF COURSE, YOU JUST HAD TO GET A LITTLE QUEER ACTION . # STARS WAS STRETCHING IT.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

"My name is John, my wife Karen and I have been married for 10 years now. "

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"They introduce themselves as Antonio and Karen. "

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Why name both women Karen? Even using Karen-1 and Karen-2 would have been an improvement. It's needlessly confusing, and and easy rating of 1.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

ICK69 LIKES IT THEN ITS DEFINITELY GETS A. 1

26thNC26thNCabout 1 month ago

Bitch told him he was going to be a cuck, and the made it happen. How is this a loving wife Ic69cunter? You obviously have never met a LW.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

A true loving wife sex story awesome

targetmantargetmanabout 1 month agoAuthor

Hi everyone, thanks for all the comments. This is my first story, and that's how I will learn. I knew the 2 Karens was a bit gimmicky, but I didn't expect such strong pushback. Live and learn.

Anyway I love you guys that are my new followers and everyone that favorited 2nd Honeymoon.

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