All Comments on 'Seducing Mr Andrews'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Well done overall though I didn't care for the perspective choice. 5*

Rapierwit24601Rapierwit24601over 2 years ago

A very hot story, but I had to give it 4 stars for the rather juvenile and annoying 2nd person narrative.

Alberto_MBFAlberto_MBFover 2 years ago

2nd person POV is stupid in most cases, but particularly bad here

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Nice sexy tale. Wish the narration was changed to a first person account.

WittonWittonover 2 years ago

I'm with Rapierwit - told from first or third person POV it is an easy five, but not second - lucky it is a 4

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Love it

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Great from any Point of View including 2d: Five Stars!

And does she do him again? Or is she Preggers? Delicious!

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