All Comments on 'Selena: Anal Goddess Pt. 02'

Really good, I thoroughly enjoyed the story. However, it does suffer from the "LIterotica Disease" of over use of adjectives and adverbs. Honestly, you could cut two thirds of them from your story and the result would be a distinct improvement.

I wish negative scores were possible. Get help.

Sennacherib45: Thank you. That's helpful and makes sense. It's a result (I think) of not having pictures. The barrage of adjectives is an insecure attempt to make it more graphic but duly noted.

Great story. Don't cut anything from it this or your next one.

Seriously, I think your stories are the best in the category.