All Comments on 'Separate Lives - Donnie & Mel'

Pretty sure that was a divorce in the makings. Bad ending.

very confusing; your gender references are mixed up and not clear; you really need to proof read your stories so that they make sense to you

Our union, somehow, was brought back through my infidelity.

Nope, it actually wasn't, his marriage became a lie, he was a lie, she got shit on and never knew it.

Not a good story at all. By any stretch of the imagination, I may add.

Is there a point to this story?

Looks like from the other comments these guys are unaware of the original story. I can see that this probably wouldn't make a lot of sense without that. I am so I love that you continued Donnie's story. Great job as usual. MLF