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by alanhomerj

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DirtyOldM50DirtyOldM50over 3 years ago

Great action but horrible writing. It seems you get carried away with your ideas and getting them written down. Next time go back, re-read, check spelling and punctuation.

I look forward to seeing what they get up to next.

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