All Comments on 'Sexed Up'

Good premise.

But seriously lacking in details.

Needed lots more teasing. Of her pussy. Of her breasts -- nothing with them at all. Of her asshole. Lots of preliminary touching/teasing/fingering with dialog about how it felt.

Then, even though there was supposed to be a series of larger and larger butt plugs, it goes from the first one to his King Kong cock. Huh?

And you wrote TAUNT when you meant TAUT.

Three stars.

Good story, although it’s very short, if you meant it as part of a story set that are staccato snapshots of our MC enjoying being teased/satisfied etc it’d work well, if not it just gets going and then stops which is just as frustrating for us readers as it is for Laura desire for an orgasm. 4⭐️ because despite it being too short I liked it and want to read more. Cheers, Ppfzz.